It gets better as each sample is depleted...
the begining ounded like a whole song that was smudged together... the drumset needs to be a bit more pumped up... (I'm wearing headphones... I finally picked some up and now I see how good I've become with mising but... when I heard this it sounded like you were aiming for some dark trance..)
Send me the FL file so I can edit it myself... I won't submit it on this site unless I get permission from you... I am thinking about starting an underground CD with a few people. I'm good with mixing... I think I have someone thinking about joining who is good with melodies... and I still need someone for a harmony piece... e-mail me at firstname.lastname@example.org (Don't worry this is my alter-e-email address. I will send you my real e-mail later..)
I'd like to edit this piece and show you what I mean by a song thats smudged together...
Well, I would love to do that except this was done in Ableton Live.
The thing is, I made a 3 minute track, but then decided to just submit the last part. I guess it would be a bit hazy without building the track up slowly.
Yes, I know my mastering is not one of my masteries, if I have any.
Tell you what though, if i make another techno track using fruityloops instead of live then I'll send it to you if you want to have a play around with it, thanks for the offer!