It gets better as each sample is depleted...

the begining ounded like a whole song that was smudged together... the drumset needs to be a bit more pumped up... (I'm wearing headphones... I finally picked some up and now I see how good I've become with mising but... when I heard this it sounded like you were aiming for some dark trance..)

Send me the FL file so I can edit it myself... I won't submit it on this site unless I get permission from you... I am thinking about starting an underground CD with a few people. I'm good with mixing... I think I have someone thinking about joining who is good with melodies... and I still need someone for a harmony piece... e-mail me at goten753@hotmail.com (Don't worry this is my alter-e-email address. I will send you my real e-mail later..)

I'd like to edit this piece and show you what I mean by a song thats smudged together...