A little on the crazy side for me :D

But i'm 100% sure that this song is better than my first song (wich isn't on ng). The melody is too much spread out, in my opinion, as if there was no order and that it didn't hold together.

I have to things to say about this piece, it needs a bassline and/or if there is a bassline it needs to be louder so that i can hear it.

The other thing is that i think that you should use a little more instruments and vary it up a little. Different instruments represent different ideas and feelings and it always give a refreshing taste to the song.

This time the drums were a little less annoying because they had a much better volume level.

With more practice you'll be able to make some great songs, so keep at it. Let me know when you'll have a couple of new songs out. I will glady review them.

Keep up the good work!