Beat could be a little better but this is still amazing =D.
Keep making music!
Nice "Remake" ;)
Since this song does sound like something you would make up, I'm guessing it's 100% originaly made from you. It had some great vibes to it. Doesn't sound too diverse from all the other songs I've heard from people, since it uses the same beat for most of the time, but hey it's not the bad either.