do you want some feedback of being this music in a series?
can i use this for soundtrack?

Very Good

I might use it sometime.

good

i've heard better but this really is a great song i wish i knew how to make music like this! :D

nice intro

Well, just mentioning that I love the intro. Reminds me so much of Flames i nthe Sky. And just with all due respect, it doesn't raise the bar after that, and just stays the same level for me. And maybe if you altered that melody at points with a new sound (steel guitar, piano, etc).

great

if ever make a flash i'll be sure some ur songs