I listened to this until the 1:02 mark. You can take my opinion as a grain of salt, however... I feel that this could have been better made. I understand this is a demo, so I will try and make my opinion as objective as possible. I actually really enjoyed the intro and the background music, I thought that was by far the best thing about this piece. I feel that was soiled by the singing... but again that is just my opinion. Please keep up the work because I really think you did great on the background music, just... the singing threw the song for me :(