I kept expecting more than I ended up getting. Don't get me wrong, parts of this song would make killer loops, but as a full song many of the build-ups don't pay off the way one would expect (feels like the sound should thicken up) Some strong points of this piece would include the patch selection and stand alone rhythms and melodies. I loved your synths and as I said earlier, if you take any of several portions of this song as stand alone loops, I think they would work really well. Despite my nitpicks I still quite enjoyed this track. (\
Really like the melody's, especially how you introduced the bassline :) Only a little bit hollow and empty mix! Good job non the less :) 4/5
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