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This is what happens when I make music without considering my audience. I like it.

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So here we go:

I didn't like it much. I'm going to say that right off the bat. Maybe it's just not my kind of music but I just can't imagine someone who would actually listen to stuff like this over and over again.
First off, your drums. they are panned way too extreme for my taste, you could have played around with that a little more, for example let them pan against each other with an lfo or something so the snare doesn't always sit on the left and the bass and crash (which sounds rather awfull and has no dynamic range what so ever) on the right. The other sounds are rather good the bass that you introduce right after the sirens at the start was the sound that I liked the most. You unfortunately didn't use it that much later on or you just didn't mix it in very well, which gets me to the next point.

The mixing:
It all sounds very mashed together, try to give every instrument room in the frequencyspectrum to work in. Your mix is mainly a pile of mud. The whole thing doesn't really sound pleasantly compressed so you should probably look into compression for your sounds aswell. Also you should try to sidechain some of your stuff in this too to give the instruments room in terms of loudness. So yeah try to improve that and you might get something decent out of this.


I did not like the composition. It's all over the place. You dont really know what you have to think of it as the listener. It's quite as confusing as the title, so well I guess you were going for that all along. Try to streamline a bit more in future productions maybe.

Overall a pretty awful track, I hope I didn't just hate on your track and gave some constructive criticism to improve your skills.


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Sep 29, 2013
1:31 AM EDT
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4 MB
1 min 46 sec

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