Pretty cool, maybe a little heavy on the drums, since it overshadowed pretty much everything else. Maybe turn it a little bit down (like 1 notch), and it'll be quite better. Don't listen to a lot of acid, but this may get me in the feels for it.
Maybe the ending could be a little bit more "crashy", like something being smashed, that also has a lot of echo? Just my thoughts.

Keep it up! :)