ok before anything else
1 this is a demo (thats why its shit(because i have no production skills(or vocal skills(or skills))))
2 sorry it takes so long to get to the chorus
3 feedback always welcome
4 just listened back to it and you can hear me coughing... tough shit i need to wash the fucking dishes you'l have to wait
i do harmonies :D not my forte but parts sound pretty... adequate
i have had awful writers block recently so i thought id do a style of music im less familiar with to get the ball rolling again, iv enjoyed recording this demo (minus the fucking mic stand falling on me repeatedly) if you listen hard enough (which is not very you can hear where i said "for fucks sake" because i couldn't get the harmony right before the chorus but before i did vocals i made a tempo change for that chorus so moved everything forward one so i wasnt counting myself in at 100bpm and then playing at 86bpm so long story short, everything cut out when i said it so i kept it in,
ok heres the lyrics

like jigsaws with spare parts we fitted perfectly
like moments lost in time we drifted regrettably
and it was all my fault and i take full responsibility
for my deeds

like days when you wake up and everything feels so wrong
but that doesn't matter when you wake up next to me
dont you know yet

i live for you
regardless of the life that we live

i live for you
you told me to
and i try
to make you try
i live for you
id die for you
and i try
to make you try

and days go by
but who are we to try
we got left behind
you should know by now

i live for you
you told me to
and i try
to make you try
i live for you
id die for you
and i try
to make you try

walked so far away from you
growls on the horizon shimmer in the air
reverberating syncopating
its safe to say that any shred of an idea is purged from my mind
a vacuum in essence of thought
and an absence of light