i thought

it was different from most classical pieces... the trumpet might have gone out of its range (low range) a little bit too...maybe just one note. i liked teh change of pace too. the brass didnt sound real, but then brass never really sounds "real" unless ur listening to a live recording or something...im sure ur gonna be really good when u start refining ur classical music. it sounds like u were just experimenting chords a lot, but thats the same thing i did when i first started out. the only thing i would have done at 1:06 would be a little less trumpet. it overpowered at some parts. also, i liked the nice, full chord at 0:52. had to get that in there...nice job and keep it up. sorry about the "in depth" review but i got stuff to do. c ya

Sweetness

DAMN IT!

My friend SecurityInACan got to you before me... the bastard...

and those were my ideas too >_>.

Well since Security handled the imagery, i'd like to suggest a few things to the piece.

As stated, the piece has a good ambiant quality, and those disjointed strings serve to produce a chaotic atmosphere effectively. I feel the chimes may be unnecessary.

I think a great instrument for this piece which I didn't hear often enough is the timpini, it would work great to set a war like, uncertainty, which is the image I get from this piece itself. I heard it for a short while around 0:54.

That is what you must remember, percussional instruments like the crash, timpini, clavbell etc, must be used more then once to have an effect in most cases. For example, I heard a triangle sound once, and a crash only once in this piece. I think it would have made the song a bit more uniform if you used these more then once, or none at all. The chimes near the beginning (0:22) served a good purpose, I don't think you should use them near the end.

I can imagine this piece with rain going on in the background, and then it reminds me of the movie Blade Runner. I don't know if you've seen it, but its about the uncertain future of engineered clones who are hunted down on Earth. The music would fit perfectly in that movie as well.

Thats all that comes to mind right now. 5/5 from me dj_padman1, keep them coming.

Impressive

Hey dj_padman1

In response to the reviewer before me, I highly disagree with you on pretty much every level. It's true padman hasn't made a lot of classical pieces, but I do not see this lacking in any way. I see a great amount of potential to it, it would right new server great for an ambiant bg music to some movie, probably sci-fi setting.

Those strange strings at 1:06 were very interesting in my opinion. They were off key? It served to make a very chaotic, kind of unsatisfying feeling. Do not take that as a bad sign, that means the song can make somebody feel unsettled, yet keep them listening. I suppose to somebody who doesn't listen to instrumental pieces often, this may not be catchy, I was captivated by the images it presented.

I think the title fits the image perfectly this time.

I would like to see you produce a classical trance/ambiant piece padman. Try to merge both worlds. You have ample experience with the electronic musical department, see how far you can take it. I did a few songs like that, and I feel it helped me understand both worlds better.

5/5 from me dj_padman1, keep them coming.

Meh,

I recommend you don't prodcue classical anymore. Not that it's bad. It just doesn't suit you. Stick with, ambient, trance and drum n bass. Lol. The itself. It doesn't grab your attention. The trumpet is cheesy sounding. Try lowering the velocity on strings to make them sound more realistic. Anyways, good try.

:D

Fifen'd anyways.