I've gotta agree with SplashKhat, but I wanted to add that it sounds like just a mish-mash of verses from pop culture songs too.
It's a acapella from a killer song
The vocals are out of tune to the track! not something you could fix with a pitch shift cause the scales are different. If you play the vocal melody on a piano you'll see where it's off compared to the music. The bass is thin depending on what you're listening through, double it up with another bass drum so you get that subwoofer kick and a good tone to compliment. I didn't enjoy this track as is which reflects my rating. If you could fix the problems I'd easily give you a 4+. You've got skills, but study more music. What you can do is good, but could be greater.
Thanks for the honest comment! I can fix the vocals, that's not a problem , but yes I should layer the bass, thanks for the tips!
this is pretty awesome, i think this is a good direction artistically.
thanks bro, appreciate it
thank you sir