I like the samples and atmosphere at the beginning. The guitar part is catchy, and the beat also adds to the texture. The funky synth at :36 is nice, and the strings at :58 have a nice airy vibe. I like the vocal sample at 1:20. Once the main harmonic section gets repeated at 2:00, I’m starting to feel that this piece needs a stronger sense of development over time. There also isn’t a lot of dynamic melodic content here. My main concerns here overall include the lack of variety (harmonic, structural, or otherwise) and the generic chord progression. I’m also not a fan of the fade-out ending. Still, the production quality is solid, the atmosphere is refreshing, and you have a good sense of harmony and progression. Keep at it, Svenzo! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.75/10