It was alright. I could go into detail as to how the song could possibly be improved, but seeing as you said this was done a year ago, I imagine you might have already greatly improved since then, so I'll just leave it off saying that it was pretty good. Don't forget to look back on your past work for inspiration, because it will teach you a lot more now than then.
Yes, thank you for the review. My previously uploaded piece, Liftoff, is my latest orchestral work, if you would like to check that out. I honestly don't know how much I've improved because I've had on-off periods of great musical creativity since then, but yeah.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.