I have to say, I was skeptical of hearing lyrics in one of your songs at first, but after hearing this...I was pleasantly surprised to see how well it works! The lyrics are a little hard to understand at times without using the description as a reference, but all in all it sounds great! You both did a really great job on this. I really hope this won't be the last time you two combine your talents!
...I have nothing to say other than...BAD ASS TO THE MAX!
Wow... just... yeah, wow. Ok, review time.
Pros: Did I mention wow? Yeah, I was surprised the lyrics added a great deal to your song. Props to Edobean's vocals and lyrics. For a moment, I thought I was listening to a full band that I'd hear on the radio stations. Evanescence comes to mind in fact. Melody too is top notch as always. Never ceases to amaze me you make all this music by yourself. If I hadn't been following your music for a long time, I'd swear you actually have a full band behind you in these songs.
Cons: Several points the vocals were a little unclear (particularly around the parts where her lyrics speed up and tone changes), but it's a trade-off because when the vocals WERE clear, the melody was a little covered up.
Other: Overall, a spectacular piece. In terms of overall enjoyment, I'd say I prefer your Dark Star piece, but only by a very slight margin. As always, keep up the good work, your stuff is completely awesome.
Really enjoyed it I just wish could hear the vocals a little better
If you had tried and told me that this song could sound good with lyrics before i heard this, I would've called you a liar. But holy shit. That is amazing. I just....can barely put my amazement into words. The ambient tone of the voice just....AGH I just can't get over how amazing it sounds! It sounds a little convoluted at times, but quickly jumps back into powerful timing, at always just the right spot. I just...I cannot praise this enough. I know it sounds cliche, but I wish i could give this so much more than 5 stars. In conclusion, it was already kick ass, and I didn't think it could get better, and I was wrong.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.