Sounds good to me!

I really like your ideas in there. While the starting choir pad instrument was slightly cheesy, I really liked the direction in which you drove the whole track. That simple arpeggio at the start fit perfectly, especially with that lowpass filter on it going progressively.

I'm not sure about the drums at the minute mark though... those sound human, like some kind of beatboxing. I feel it sounds slightly odd in that context but it didn't feel completely out of place either. I might have gone for something different though, but then again, this IS your track! :)

I like how the whole pressure just goes off when you go into a simple kick pattern, that really helps the track breathe a bit more and decompress so you can have room for another buildup.

To be honest, I really enjoyed this track! I especially liked the outro... it just gave it that little ending feeling. Sounded great, flowed in nicely, and felt more than up to par!

Kudos on the track man!

Pretty nice and atmospheric. I haven't heard the original but I can tell this is good.

not bad keep up the good work!