your skills on the melodies are very good You are more of an instrumental person, i will be good and rate only the melodies and synths. BUT you completely forget about the drums, if you want to keep up with techno you have to work more to your beats bro, add some kick, some bass, something raw and dryyyyyy
I don't think Techno is the right genre, I think cinematic is much more correct tough. also It does sound a bit like it's all the same so work on more freq also add some cool progressions in it add uplifters and downlifters etc. and a warm bass can really change the mood so add one if u like to have it a bit more darkend like it is now. cause u don't have a really big bass under it
Keep it going.
ps: u can always ask for advice, U know where to find me ;)
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