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Sep 6, 2013 | 4:54 PM EDT
File Info
4.5 MB
3 min 56 sec
3.16 / 5.00

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Rated 3.16 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
464 Plays | 22 Downloads
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Electronic - House

Author Comments

Hey guys!

This is my SECOND track after about 8 months of learning in Fl studio. I believe i've developed alot since my first song which you can find on my profile!

Feedback would be appriciated, any type. Wether its small or not, it doesn't matter. Everything is helpful! Enjoy!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

not bad song kinda too oldschool and generic


Rated 4 / 5 stars

This was pretty good.
When I was listening to it I was thinking that this could be playing in an animation before some kind of intense action because when the climax of the song came it it felt that something suspenseful should be happening like a fight or something of that nature.

Man you sure love your buildups. This time around I feel that for this song it works to your advantage because once the climax at 1:24 took over, I was like YEAH!!!!!! However I do wish that the climax stayed on longer because it had me moving. Then again that might be just me.

i also noticed that a few of the instruments seemed to be panned towards the dead center of the track. Try to experiment with your panning and spread out your song a bit when you can. You don't have to have the song favor the left or the right an extreme amount, just a little bit to vary your sound. It can also come in handy to make some parts stand out a little more as well and have their own space to be heard in. In fact, you seem to getting the hang of it well with some of your instruments this time around.(Even if this portion that I wrote isn't necessary, I'm writing it anyway just to be safe)

The piano could use a very slight bit of an echo just to touch it up a bit. Still sounded good though.

Between the panning and build ups you're definitely getting better and I'm glad that you are. Great work. This song makes me want operate a Gundam!

Alohha responds:

Thanks for the 2nd respons! All your feedback have been helping me get better so i appriciate that :)


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Typing this while listening.

Very awesome introduction chords.
I dig the melody and the progression in it.
Then at 30 seconds you introduce a kick, which is way too soft for the main kick.
So I don't really think it is a main kick haha, as expected you keep building.
At 1 minute a really nice tom variation and keeps building and building.
I can really feel tension.

Then at 1.24.................. 0.o ....................... 0.o ?!.
What the hell ?!. Only 3 months of producing and already being this far.
You have some great potentional mate.
You already know how the structure of a house track is made, and the mastering is good enough!.
This will probably be my only point of criticm too. And then especially the kick.
You can hear it, but it is a bit too stereo, not sure if you did this on purpose or not,
But because it is stereo it does not give as much power as it could. Also, a stereo kick takes up potential space for a pluck / melody or chord for example.

But apart from that, im amazed at how good this is for real!.

9/10 5/5 from me mate.
It is nearly perfect on a professional level, and beyond perfect for a guy 8 months in.


Alohha responds:

Thanks alot! :)

I've been having problems with layering kicks but i am working on it!