This is quite cool man! What program do you use coz who knows...maybe we could collab someday or something. Whatever man...later bro!
I use FL Studio 6. You?
I was realy amazed by the work you've done , but some tips's from my side.
1)The bass shoudnt've gone down down down.
2)Piano seriously needs some FX's like reverb or delay.( nice melodie btw)
3) The stop part is empty , when it should not add a SFX there.
(and i hear that you've used some FL factory SFX's heare , nice to hear that ppl still use those;)
Overally this is a great song but needs a bit more work.
P.S : Upload songs when you realy feel that they are compleate coz its difficult to delete them.
Well this was a long time ago so I've improved a bit.
The soft synth are is nice =)
The progression in this track is very subtle, and actually very nicely done. The kick is nice and powerful, but it would ahve been nicer if you could ahve EQed it some more, since it just sounds like a default FL kick.
When you brought in the lead, it would ahve been great if you would ahve done a big beat drop, instead of the beat becoming nothing more than a drone (drone = something in the backround to great noise, to fill up space). Then, have a big break in, and have a finished beat. Open hi hats, the piano, everthing. It'd sound much more powerful.
The piano riff is rather nice, but it just sounds like a dafault FL piano. Add some delay, some reverb, and EQ it so that its high ended. So it sounds more nice =)
The song is good, so just need to work on FX some more, and adding some breaks. So listen to some dream trance producers, and get a feel for how they do it. That will give you more of an idea for how to do the breaks that I described to you =)
Theres your review that you asked for, have a nice day =D
Thanks Man, I need all the constructive criticism I can get. Any idea how you delete songs? Incase I want to update them?
A few tips..
Nice job on this one, though I'm guessing it was a bit longer than what was submitted (seems to cut off at the end). What you should try next is giving your songs a harder beat. Slow down the bass a bit and experiment with making them sound a bit more techno-like. It sounded a bit like video game music. Nice job though. Just remember to avoid making Euro-trash pop music, I honestly can't stand that crap.
Lol, when it cuts off it starts back up again if that is what you mean.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.