I like the flute I'm liking the panning effects you have here though some of the other instruments in this (especially at the opening of the song) I just can't get the feel for.
OOOH wait a second. 1:32 Now this is what i'm talking about. This is much better and it just gets crazier and crazier then STOP! The nightmares over but what have you woken up to? I feel that at 2:53 your instruments are clashing slightly thanks to not enough mastering perhaps turn some of the instruments down. For the most part this was a fun listen it did tell a story. I was gonna give it 2 and a half stars but i think its worth at least 3.
Good work and keep it up!