This is cool.
I would say this is more breaks than dnb (although you probably think so to judging from your tags), and I enjoy a nice breaks piece every now and then. This one really caught my ear - you have a knack for clean drum work from what I'm hearing, so good work on that! I do like the melody you have going in this track, but it does get a bit repetitive for me. I think breakbeats tend to get repetitive if you don't work hard at variation, so it should be something you consider. The change in drum patterns around 3:00 did a good job of bringing me back. The building metal fx you use to signal a transition got a bit repetitive for me as well, surprisingly... Good balance throughout the track, you did well. Enjoyed it! Keep it up, my friend.
I am not in the mood for a detailed response, but thanks for the review and good rating, and future versions (if I make any) will have:
* More transitions
* Variations of melody for a less repetitive lead.