Very nice sounds!

Really, thats all to comment on, other than the rest of the song =D I notice that the song has a very stuttery feel to it? Its like the time between the notes aren't very even. You might wanna work on that.

The song, later on, gets even nicer sounds with the strings, but they are LOUD!!!Turn them down a bit =(

Small little things, but they need to be fixed =) You are doing really good, keep it up! Could you drop by my audio page and leave a review or two? I'd appreciate it =)