Man...
Never thought I'd see a remix of this here. Well, time to get down to the grit and stuff. For one, all of your music sounds a bit scratchy, believe me or not. You did a nice job on the remixing, but you should at least bass it out a bit, make it lower in volume by just a very small amount (not a whole lot) increased volume also causes that scratchy sound.
This is by far one of your better remixes, especially since it doesn't slur together. I loved this song too, mind you.