it's okay

It's interesting, but there is too much delay in the beginning, and it gets old fast. It really isn't very effective as techno without melody. Because techno usually doesn't have a solid set of lyrics, you need a good melody to draw listeners in and keep them interested. However, I can see where you come from, as I am also just starting making music using Fl Studio. Anyhow, good luck in your future musical endevours. I'm sure your next one will be a hit.