It's interesting, but there is too much delay in the beginning, and it gets old fast. It really isn't very effective as techno without melody. Because techno usually doesn't have a solid set of lyrics, you need a good melody to draw listeners in and keep them interested. However, I can see where you come from, as I am also just starting making music using Fl Studio. Anyhow, good luck in your future musical endevours. I'm sure your next one will be a hit.