I'm going to avoid saying the same exact things I said last time I reviewed your friend's song and focus on what I liked.
The song is very relaxing, and slightly catchy.
I think you should try a drum beat next time.
I wish there was a little more variety in the vocal melodies.
Thanks for your review! All of the ideas you put forward are going to help in the long run, when we finally get some good audio recording equipment of course! For now we're asking that you give opinions on what you do/don't like! Thanks for all the suggestions, they help a lot.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.