I love the melody in this song, the sounds are beautiful but why i only give it 4 stars and not five, is because the song is boring, nothing happens. If you can make the different parts in the song more clear and really make the audience feel the up's and down's in it, that would be awesome. But i give you a four because it's a really good song but it wasn't up to my expectations. You should keep this up and this stuff will be really good :D