Good song choice first off. The guitar isn't very acoustic sounding or good sounding at all but the piano sounds good. The drums are a bit too quiet as well as a little pop sounding and your voice doesn't fit the song but you do have a pretty good voice. A bit disappointing so far. At 02:22 that part in the song is amazing and I must say you did it very well. From 03:32 on it was just okay, nothing super special.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.