Your content is always something to look forward to man, especially when I know you're trying different things and moving past your comfort zone.
I'm starting to like your synths, they've grown on me an awful lot. Although you could describe 1:30 as dull or boring, I think it's actually a nice break form the intense atmosphere you created beforehand.
It's a great song, yet there is still something missing. I can't put my finger on it, yet with your songs there is always a very slight emptiness. I don't know what it is, but it's diminishing as you get better!
Thankyou for the review :)
I think I know what's missing ; a good catchy melody that repeats itself throughout the song. I didn't focus on the melodies this time.
I like how you're shaking it up a little recently, BlueOceans! :D The intro was a little long, but I like the mood and funky, frantic synths ( :03). Transitions and structure were good. It got a little dull around 1:30; you might need some more variation there, but I like how you led into the more energetic part again. The melody is a little simple in the beginning, but I appreciate how you varied at 2:31. I didn't really like the instrument at 2:44 all that much, but I liked the way you ended the piece itself. Btw, DnB usually has a more prominent sub-bass, or at least a heavily layered bass, but this is still a cool track. Nice work! ;)
Thankyou for the review! I don't think 15 seconds was long for an intro, we probably have different opinions on when the intro ends. The last thing I did before I completed the song was lowered the sub bass a lot, that was a mistake :( . I agree it got dull around 1:30, but I like how relaxing that part of the song is. Next time I will keep the sub bass louder and try to add more variation and complexity to the melodies.
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