I'm not a musician or anything but I listen to a lot of music, so let my words carry as much weight as you'd like. I think the only thing that sounds country about this song is your singing, whether that is good or bad is entirely up to you (I think it's a good thing personally). The music in the background is good and seems surprisingly sophisticated for the genre, unlike the singing. I do not like your lyrics; they're linear, predictable and cliche (which is generally why I tend to dislike most country music).
Those are the two big components right? Music and singing. So, I'm done. In short, what seemed to be an interesting, intriguing melody became background music to a less challenging and not very intellectually engaging string of words.
Thank you for the review. I will work on my lyrics, and work on getting a better country sound. I didn't have very much to work with, because I am a solo artist, and Computer Recording software only offers electronic-sounding instruments. But I have been working on getting a band together, and have also been gathering more real instruments to use and record with, rather then using a MIDI Keyboard with sounds.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.