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I've go to say it is an interesting take. I like your willingness to explore different instruments to redo these "classic" tunes. It's really good but there are some critiques for you. Take'em or leave'em.
*Your intro and the intro to the original do not meld. Work on the transition because you really have a nice sound in the intro, but without a proper transition it jerks the listener out of the entire song.
*The following probably hurt your score the most. Perhaps I am being too harsh and unjust, but in the original I LOVE the harmonized guitars at the moments such as (1:33 and 2:38). The fact that such a strong part was overlooked in this recreated version was shocking. It is the pinnacle of this piece (in my opinion) and without that it seems empty.
Keep it up. You have a good ear for this, and perhaps some studying in music theory would enhance that. Nice work!
I hope that wasn't too constructive o.O