Nice beginning. I like how it it leads into the beat. The bass has to be my favorite thing about the song. It kind of feels like I should be relaxing. Kind of a song that would try to help me go to bed lol. It took me a while to get used to the strings and the brass, but I like em.
Hmm I have a couple of grips though, but it may just be me. I am wearing my studio hps like you recommended :D, and i hear that the snaps and kick is a wee bit too loud. Also, as much as I like the bass, I thought it needed a new variation once in a while. It's just...It feels like the bass is ur main focus point of this song, because its what I hear the most of, and its loudest. And that's Okay! For a 4 minute song, i definitely recommend some variation =) but if your happy with how it is, by all means keep it! It's your art.
Keep it up.