Your voice / text composing skills are way better than your electronic composing skill. The ,,beat,, miss a lot, but I liked the text and that Â´s what hip hop is about.
So my advice - Try to add more sounds to make it sound full, focus more on intro ( Outro was good tho ).
So 4/5 and keep it up ;)
I meant to hit the positive. .but thanks for your feedback. I will work on it.