Nice bass synth
The first thing that catched my attention with this song is the bassline. The note on the 3rd bar of the bass riff is a little offtune in the beginning. Might wanna consider changing that.
The rest is good. I would just consider making more catchy things, y'now? Like, a good old 303 riff that just gets your head bobbin.
You hold a lot of promise =) Good luck in the future! Keep it up! Could you check out my audio and leave a review or two? I'd appreciate it =D