this is some nice interesting style :D
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the style :D
I felt that at 0:33, the bass volume dropped significantly pretty quickly, which was taken over by the snare, volume wise. Maybe you could have eased the volume change a bit, to make it seem more natural.
I really like how mystical the song sounds and feels to listen to.
I enjoy your choice of synths except for the lead that comes in at 1:21. I feel like it doesn't have enough weight behind it, even though it's supposed to sound light, though that might just come down to personal taste.
I can't explain why, but I absolutely love the chimes that come in now and again.
It was a good song. There's some room for improvement, but it's nice nonetheless. Keep up the good work :)
Hi there! Thank you for reviewing!
That's interesting what you said about the bass, because I actually didn't lower the volume at the 0:33 mark. I probably should just boost the volume of the bass and/or lower the volume of the snare some more.
I'm glad you enjoyed the song overall. I'll keep working harder for sure. Again, thank you for listening and reviewing! :D
As they said, seemed a bit quiet, Perhaps start the fade at a bit of a higher volume, or maybe a quick little fade to get it up, then slow it down? Suggestions. However I thoroughly enjoyed that beginning, grabbed my attention right off the bat, especially when the piano came in. Kept my interest the entire way through. :)
The layering of sounds was very nice at 00:33 all the way through to to 1:00 when the other sounds almost dropped in volume to make room for that low yet prominent sound for 8 beats, then it hit off, really nicely.
The breakdown at 2:24, was very unique, I liked the fairy dust like sound near the end of it, where it hit off once more for a nice return of the melody.
Overall, I really enjoyed it, Your creative juices are definitely flowing :D.
Hey! Thanks for reviewing!
I did both of your suggestions to see how the volume will do in the beginning. I hope it works out this time haha.
I'm glad you enjoyed this song! I will definitely work harder to make better music and keep these creative juices flowing. Thank you again for the review!
The intro was far to quiet, once the song got rolling it was ok, but the synth lead seemed a little bit lackluster, I liked the way you broke the song apart with reversed loops
Hi there! Thank you for your critique. When I get time, I'll try to fix that intro. Sorry that it was too quiet :(
Again, thank you for the review. I will work harder!
Your intro was very quiet right off the bat but when the piano came in it really sounded magical. I also really enjoyed your unique sounds and progression. The hats couldn't have been better placed in the buildup. You had some interesting instruments although i didn't completely enjoy all of them you did have some great melodies going on. I really enjoyed the breakdown at around 2:25 also although it was rather sudden i did enjoy the change of pace and when the main melody came back in.
All in all, A good song with a unique structure. I enjoyed it allot and i look forward to checking out some more of your tunes.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review this song! I truly appreciate it.
I'm sorry about that opening. I kept trying to adjust the volume to get it right for the beginning, because I really wanted to do a fade in type of intro. When I checked it, I thought it was okay. I was wrong though :(
I'm glad you enjoyed the song overall. I'll keep working harder to make better music. Again, thank you for your review!
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