I really like this piece! It's dark and quirky and I like to hear that in music. I really enjoyed the choice of guitar tone that you used. It has a lot of reverb and it really adds to the song. The bass and synth in the song creates a dark and mysterious atmosphere that would be perfect in a movie soundtrack.
Overall, I really enjoyed this short piece and it has a lot of soul, and making a musical piece with soul is not an easy thing to do by any means!!
Keep up the good work!
I like the general feel of your work, it is kinda dark which is something i always like and it feels like something pretty bad happened. So, i think you get the ambient part right.
But it is kinda hard to review on it because it's basically the same stuff with variations in the background during the whole piece. So i can't say much except that i like what you did but there is definitly a need to thing about a movie or something to go with it like you said, else it might be better to have some kind of second main theme.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.