It's very original, definitely.
At first, the heavy panning of the instruments makes it a bit hard to listen, but it gets better as the song progresses.
I think percussion of some sort would really improve this track.
I'm a bit confused, though: what was the mood you were trying to create with this song?
It's based on the portrayal of Geth in Mass Effect 3 ( a synthetic, A.I race who were waged war on by their masters and who, then, drove their masters off their planet and secluded themselves) and their question on the definition of "life". It originally was titled "Slave Uprising", but as I wrote more on it,
it became more about the journey towards infinite intelligence, about the Omega Point ( google it).
So it's really about a sort of awe, and a feeling of power, but in a more mysterious way, not a grand one.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.