Reminds me of something that Prussian Blue would do, but without the "politics".
Thanks for the review!
i agree with BlueOceans,
either the vocals need a boost or the guitar less.
however once you have done one of these things,
maybe u could think about editing the vocals just a little bit?
with a tad reverb maybe,
widen it a bit to make it sound a bit fuller.. or anything of your choice lol
Thanks for the review, reverb does sound like a good idea!
It's very hard to hear the vocals. They need to be more clear and louder than the guitar. If you can't get clearer vocals, I think you should lower the guitar so it's not overpowering the vocals. I like the chords and melodies. It sounds like a very sad song. It reminds me of Kelly Clarkson's album My December, specifically the songs Maybe, Sober, and Irvine.
Thanks for your input. I do agree that the vocals should be louder.
Man, it sounds like a start! The chord progression is great, but the guitar totally over-powers her voice. I think this is mostly a reflection on your recording equipment, though. If there is anything you can do to bring out her voice and make it less distorted and muffled, do it. Otherwise, get a new mic. :P
If you get the chance to work on this more, maybe make a piano intro and have the guitar come in later as a crescendo.
I would love to hear you improve and work with this style more! :D
We recorded it with an iPhone and I took the audio from there! Aha I'll try and work on getting the guitar to be quieter, maybe we'll record it again! We're going to be posting a remix very soon! :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.