I like it!
It's got a nice attitude, and it's noticeable you make an effort in the song to stand out and make something new and interesting. It pays off.
However, at parts the different melodies kind of intertwine and it's kind of confusing so to say.
Try to keep a red line instead in where the song's headed. But the overall feel of the song is awesome!
Glad you like it! And I will keep your advice in mind!