sounds like when i take a dump

thats right it sounds like shit.dude what the fuck do u call that crap?ForWhomTheBellTolls ROTFLMAO!!!!!sounds like u just got on fruity loops and hit the randomize button a 10000 times.i thought you liked metal or maybe u do and just cant play it and u feel like a loser cause u cant play and instrument so u thought "hey i gotta good idea i'll fuck around on fruity loops that will make me and musician yeah!!" but then u found out that you was no good at that and u couldn't create metal songs on there all u could do was create piano sounding crap so u turned into a pussy and started wearing pink polo shirts and sucked on your little brothers dick for awhile.and u crap on other people's songs what the fuck is wrong with your head man did mommy and daddy drop u 2 many times.dude if u cant play dont hate on someone that can.and from now on review shit in your genre stay clear of the dark side b/c pussy's just dont belong there.

Neat

Has a good deal of potential. Still seems quite random, but this is understanble, it IS improv.

For sure though, for your next pieces, do place more thought into them, i'd like to see what your capable of ^^.

I will give you a 5 because I don't believe this should rank so low, but in real life i'd give you high 3's.

Keep them coming.