ooo my ears!
Squeaky noises are NOT good for melodic dication.
Guitars were annoying. This song like most of your others is just too repetitive!
Look this is old ok Im not asking but you could least not compare or least not be so oh this is this and that is that...I will agree im not to great but at least im trying and this would have to be like my 1st about 2 yrs ago almost
very good for a first
i liked it although it got on my nerves after a while.