Seriously....

Come on this rules!! i love what you've done here with the contrast bewteen instruments...you should do a cover of End of all hope....with you talen itwould so rule!

nice..

hey.. i really love nightwish.. nice version.. heres a 5 and 10...

It was okay

Well I can't say much about it since I'm not goth, but I think it was alright.

Wow, scared me

The arp that bounced in outta the middle of nowhere reall scared the crap outta me. Maybe it could't hurt to have it start out a little quieter?

The song is very well professionally written, seriously. I think the only thing that you seriously need to work is the arrangement and mastering a little bit. A compressor and a bit of percussion never hurt anybody =P

You did a really great job with this one! Keep it up! Could you check out my songs sometime, y'now, return the favor? Thanks!