I am not into rap at all and it seems that you have removed vocals or they simply aint working. Can hear only melody. Anyway the melody is very well made.
It's really mellow and smooth and gives this chill about moving towards somekind of land (dunno if it's first that comes in mind becaus eof the name but it still works).
From melody I simply cannot say anything bad. And as a intro/outro/background musci artist I found this track very very VERY likelable because of it's smoothness and how well it fits for background. This kind of track you can leave on and keep doing what ever you do without being disturbed by it and maybe even make some own lyrics while (example: drawing).
Very good tune ^^
Thank you very much. :) I never did add the vocals, my level of rapping isn't really good, I find it better without my voice. Personally I like to sing, but I have yet to put up songs with my voice really. Anyway, the lyric's are just something I was messing around with and wanted to put them up.