shorten it to around 1 minute loop
I liked the wah-wah guitar noises that came in aroun 0:46 and also enjoyed the shifting, increasing beat.
Also, the deep bass drum around 2:02 and 2:12 is cool. Made a refreshing change from the high hat or whatever you were generally using for most of it.
I just found that generally the tune had a real lack of diversity. Sure, the beats actually had a lot going on, but with the guitar basically just repeating one melody twice then the wah-wah melody once, over and over, it seemed like it could only be a background tune and nothing more.
Might be good with some funny joke-rap or maybe just a lot more variation in the tune?
Or maybe you could shorten it to around 1 minute, then try and make it a kick-ass loop, condensing all your beat variations into that time-space.
That'd then be a pretty cool loop for some games or maybe even the bg of a movie.
It was like my 13th entry...
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