For a song made 4 years before i was born, it's pretty good :)
Author Comments
short little song, my first attempt, listen to the whole thing, and tell my WHY its bad.
this is pretty nice!
needs more edgy chords, methinks. everyone else is giving it a 7.5, so who am i to be any different?
It’s funny, because I was born two months and 3 days before this song was released.
johnfn responds:
that's not funny.
This isn't bad for a first song.
johnfn responds:
I still remember when I composed this (FOURTEEN YEARS AGO..............) that in the second melodic phrase, I had a better idea, but then I accidentally deleted it and couldn't remember what it was, so I was like 'screw it' and did something vaguely close but that sounds bad. still makes me mad to this day. =P
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3.23 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Dec 23, 2003
- 1:30 PM EST
- Genre
- Miscellaneous
- File Info
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- 775 KB
- 20 sec
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