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Uploaded
Dec 23, 2003 | 1:30 PM EST
File Info
Loop
775 KB
20 sec
Score
3.21 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.21 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
1,219 Plays | 217 Downloads
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Author Comments

short little song, my first attempt, listen to the whole thing, and tell my WHY its bad.

Reviews


BlueOceansBlueOceans

Rated 5 / 5 stars

This isn't bad for a first song.


johnfn responds:

I still remember when I composed this (FOURTEEN YEARS AGO..............) that in the second melodic phrase, I had a better idea, but then I accidentally deleted it and couldn't remember what it was, so I was like 'screw it' and did something vaguely close but that sounds bad. still makes me mad to this day. =P


etherealwindsetherealwinds

Rated 5 / 5 stars

johnfn chapter I

i love the distortion, i could fall asleep to this on loop xxx


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BmwdBmwd

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Poppin', Amazin, and Awesome!


johnfn responds:

ohh how embarrassing ;.;


TritoneAngelTritoneAngel

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Not bad at all

Hey man, I don't think is nearly the "piece of junk" you believe it to be. Definitely shows some good development of themes, nice diversity, good tones. I would think it could be improved by better emulations of the instruments, as they sound very computerized/midi-ish, but (as I know) this is not always an easy or feasible option. The composition itself though is very good. Don't sell yourself short!



KALO8KALO8

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

ummm

ummmmm it sounds like a ring tone lol but its good