Overall pretty good, it has quite a dreamy/sleepy feel to it. The outro has a good contrast to the rest of the song. The only thing i would say is the effect you used on the vocals reverb or delay maybe? seemed a bit much at times. R4R
It's a story of drunken plight haha, so the woozy sounds hopefully compliment that well. Thank you - I used a ringshifter and guitar amp on the vox in the chorus ("hold off") section... I may consider dialing that down. Thought it sounded nifty, but I realize it saps a bit of clarity and it can be used effectively without the Ringshifter delay and Spring Verb hitting too hard. Thanks for the review and suggestions :3
:3:3:3:3:3:3:3 thanks for the glowing review and smiley face, meng.