This is pretty good actually. You just have to let it get going. too bad your friend isn't on newgrounds.
Yeah, fuck you 2, man!
Well done, but is this yours?
This is an improvement "over the newer work" by far. Are yuo positive this is your music? If it is, then you did great, I hope in the future you spend this much effor on a song everytime,
No, this is not my music. One of my friends made it on his computer, but didn't want to put it on newgrounds because it loads it directly from your computer(if someone has hacked into newgrounds they can get your computer's code or ip address, I think that's what it's called). So I asked him if I could use one of his songs, and he agreed, provided that I only use one. And yes he is much better than I am.