You could definitely improve on the flow, but I'm rating you on the vocals and not so much on the piano portion:
Disregarding some of the off-pitch moments, your voice is especially beautiful when it hits the higher notes. For example, I found that 00:25 and 1:30 begin to invoke powerful emotions (which songs should do); choral and overtone singing suits you :)
I'd like to commend on what you have so far and encourage you to practice, practice, practice.
The piano is an old instrumental that I downloaded from freesound.org to use for radio plays I used to try to make... so it wasn't created by me. I thought I gave credit to the one who made it but I will have to recheck and see if I did that right.
It's funny, in choir I was always an alto, but I hated it. I know it is a little pitchy I will definitely practice on that and hopefully get a better, I haven't taken any vocal classes or anything so I just kind of went with it, and I know it shows, especially in the flow.
Thank you so much for your feed back.