Could have sworn I'd reviewed this one before...
PiGPEN V1 - Nice imagery but damn it lay off the fat jokes. I liked that you touched on friend voting, was the one personal side from commenting on Vince's weight.
Vinstigator V1 - Nice Butsaay/bugspray flips, bonus points for rhyming too. 'Fat jokes were weak' isn't bad in theory but it would have been nice if it rhymed... Stroking four dicks is kind of cheesy.
Kefka line is incredibly cryptic - I found you explaining it in the comments section, but I wouldn't have seen the resemblance without that outside source. Ganon and Smash Brother lines are cute.
PiGPEN V2 - Starting off mocking Vince is strong, PiG doesn't show anger or contempt very often but this is about as close as he seems to get. Overdubs/punchlines are amusing, drop like flies, etc. are all relevant to the last round but none of them are really punches. I feel like you were trying a bit too hard.
Vinstigator V2 - Immediately jumped on the lack of research, good. Beat drops line is funny, relevant, and damaging. Lag and ugliness are mediocre but only took up two lines so it's really not a big deal. Finisher isn't bad but could have used a little more volume - the first time I heard this I thought you had more bars left.
Both threw some punches but overall PiG came much weaker than he usually does and Vince was really, really on-point in his second verse.
Vince for the win.
Although I am on Vince's side, both rappers did a great job! The lyrics were also very fun and quick witted. Loved it!
Nice. Pigpen's verse starts off smooth, great play with words, though a bit repetitive with the fat - don't eat me. Vinstigator brings in some more intensity; follows the beat, packs raps. In the second part it again feels there's a bit much filler in Pigpen's verses, though the wordplay is great, less repetition would be an advantage. Vinstigator packs more of a punch with that attitude and edge too, even if the words don't always flow. Close call overall; I'd say Vinstigator wins with intensity. Great beat btw; the sound effects fit in perfectly!
My vote's on Vinsigator's side. Great job to both rappers.
Lmao Pig ftw, way more funny
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