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Author Comments

I was bored, but while making this song I tried to be abnormaly melodic than I usualy am!

Feedback needed! :(

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kkots

2013-07-04 19:02:50

Starts out really nice, so eerie. After the beat & first melody came in, there's a second melody appearing at 00:23 which instantly ruins all previously built-up atmosphere, and it sounds indeed as if it has no direction. The track gains some sort of happy mood because of its lack of direction.
Happy mood and eerie atmosphere are incompatible, thus it's broken.

DESHIEL responds:

dammit :D Well I will employ some of the melodies in future tracks :)

Thanks for your time.

Hikari

2013-07-04 18:40:22

I feel like you didn't have a real direction with this song. The mixing could use some work as well. I give my own review a 2/10

DESHIEL responds:

That's true, this project started because I opened up the piano roll on a whim, without a plan. :)

Conal

2013-07-04 18:39:31

This makes me feel chill. It's eerie too. It's okay. (Y)