Oh my gosh. I don't want to sound mean, but it sounds like you just randomly put together a bunch of drum beat samples. I used Fruity Loops before and those sounds are samples to help you out, and you sorta just mixed them together. Don't get me wrong, these are really hot sounds, but I think you could have put just an ity bit more effort into this. It's hot nonetheless.
Keep on keepin' on!
Meh... Just like When i made another song for SONY ACID... Lol. Meh... Well, Meh... Lol. I guess ur right. lol. I coulda done better, but guess what... Lol... i was so bored, I could've cared less... Man... Talk about bored. and all this useless rambling...