Ok you got the clarity on point. It is a nice piece but where did all the complexity go? I love the song you did "The Moth" only the quality was lacking. Now it seems almost opposite with this piece. Did you use a program to do this? Perhaps you should record your pieces and transfer them to a program or better yet get a midi keyboard that goes to the computer directly. Anyways, good work but I know you can do better.
I wrote this song when I was INCREDIBLY bored, so that may be the reason it is so boring.
would have got a higher rating if u hadn't touted it as awesome:P nice theme, production is even worse than mine though, lol
Hey, I've learned my lesson lol